Feedback on common app essay? (Transfer student)

I’m applying as a transfer student from a large state university to a few liberal arts colleges. Is there anyone who’d be willing to read my common app essay and give me some feedback? I’m more so looking for an overall review of the quality of the essay, not just a proofread. If you think you could help me out let me know and I’ll PM you!

Thanks!

I’ll be happy to read it

Sure! I can help you, too.