Can you check my essay???

College Essays
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<p>Hi guys. I would really appreciate it if someone could check my common app essay. I worked really hard on it and I just need some extra opinions. Thanks in advanced</p>

<p>-CR</p>

2

<p>Pleaseee…
It’s my common app essay I really need help.</p>

<p>(Bump)</p>

3

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>Thanks to the two of you that pm’d me. Both of your advice was helpful.
I completely changed my essay and I need for someone to check it again. Can anyone help?</p>

<p>TIA</p>

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<p>Bumpity. Bump bump</p>

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<p>Sure.
10char</p>

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<p>Sure, send it my way.</p>