Carnegie Mellon Essay

Applying to College
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<p>Can anyone give feedback for my essay?</p>

<p>Prompt: Please submit a one-page, single-spaced essay that explains why you have chosen Carnegie Mellon and your particular major(s), department(s) or program(s). This essay should include the reasons why you've chosen the major(s), any goals or relevant work plans and any other information you would like us to know. If you are applying to more than one college or program, please mention each college or program you are applying to. Because our admission committees review applicants by college and programs, your essay can impact our final decision. Please do not exceed one page for this essay.</p>

<p>I'm not too sure about posting my essay, but PM me if you would like to help.
Thanks.</p>

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<p>Would you guys be more likely to reply if I just posted it on here?</p>

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<p>PM it to me if you want to and I’ll ask my sister who is a 3rd year student there to read it and give up some feedback :)</p>

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<p>Try the Essay Forum. Do not post your essay in a thread; PM it to trusted readers with high post counts.</p>

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<p>PM it to me if you’d like</p>