Chance a Mount Holyoke student please

<p>Hello. Can someone read my essay please
I am currently a sophomore student from Mount Holyoke college and I am hoping to transfer to another school. here are my info: </p>

<p>High school GPA: 4.08
College GPA: 3.6
major: Econ/music. </p>

<p>My resume is pretty good and i need help on my essay. Can someone proofread my essay for me please.... </p>

<p>Schools that I am interested are: </p>

<p>brandeis university.
Colgate University
trinity college
dickinson college
union college</p>

<p>Hey, I’d be willing to take a look :)</p>

<p>Thank you so much. I just send you my draft via email. :P</p>