Chance me for Richmond's Scholar

Chance Me / Match Me!
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<p>Hi,</p>

<p>I am International Student.</p>

<p>Financial Aid = 100%</p>

<p>SAT Score - 2150 ( CR 730, M 700, CR 720 )</p>

<p>Common Application and Supplement -</p>

<p><a href="https://docs.google.com/open?id=0B7Ef0RM0dDshMFRPa0VkSlctNms%5B/url%5D"&gt;https://docs.google.com/open?id=0B7Ef0RM0dDshMFRPa0VkSlctNms&lt;/a>
<a href="https://docs.google.com/open?id=0B7Ef0RM0dDshdW9TR0cycEg5U1k%5B/url%5D"&gt;https://docs.google.com/open?id=0B7Ef0RM0dDshdW9TR0cycEg5U1k&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p>

<p>I was accepted without financial aid last year, I have reapplied this year!</p>

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<p>Overall I’d say you’re good! Especially since you’ve already been admitted.
Couple notes:</p>

<p>-typo in the second activity: “taught a adults…”</p>

<p>-Essay is long… how many words is that?</p>

<p>-I’d avoid using the parenthesis if possible, and I wouldn’t say that you “never found school to be at all difficult”… that makes it sound like you were never challenged.</p>

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<p>I do understand its long but I wanted to express myself. Isn’t it quite expressive and descriptive though?</p>

<p>****! I proofread the application yet made a typo. Damn. :(</p>

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<p>You can be descriptive without writing for almost 3 pages. </p>

<p>Also, it sounds like you’re trying to throw in SAT words as much as possible. I think it seems unnatural at some points.</p>

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<p>Ah bad luck for me… I can’t change anything now. I have already submitted my Application. :(</p>

<p>December 1st was the deadline for the Richmond’s scholar.</p>

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<p>Ah ok. Well I’m just over critical because I think you have potential! Good luck to you!</p>

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<p>@f4ngz77 - Thanks for the wishes! Constructive criticism is always beneficial. I just hope the length of the essay doesn’t adversely affect my application. :)</p>

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<p>Hi,</p>

<p>I have been accepted as a semifinalist for Richmond scholar so does that mean I’ll get accepted to UR even if I don’t qualify for the next round.</p>