I am currently a freshman biology major at a small state school who wants to transfer to a different school. I would appreciate it if you could estimate my chances to various schools.
I plan on applying to the following schools (majors in parenthesis, and order is listed in most preferred school to least preferred school.):
Rice University (Biochemistry and Cell Biology)
Emory University (Biology, or Neuroscience and Behavioral Biology)
Vanderbilt University (Biochemistry and Molecular Biology)
Johns Hopkins University (Biology)
Columbia University (Biochemistry, or Biology)
Cornell University (Biological Sciences)
Please let me know if there are other schools I should consider around the same level. I will probably only add 2 more schools to my list at most.
I have the following stats.
College Courses taken:
• Leadership Theory (Received an A [4.0]) (This was an option for a required course that all first semester students must take at my school, whether you are a first year or a transfer student)
• Calc I (Received an A [4.0]) (Required for major. I did not have AP credit for calculus due to poor performance on exam, and even then I would have taken Calc I for the GPA)
• General Chemistry I (Received an A [4.0]) (Required for major)
• Foundations of Biological Inquiry (Received a B+ [3.33]) (My lowest grade unfortunately, primarily due to partner work in labs. Required for major)
College GPA for first semester: 3.833
College Courses for next semester:
• Introduction to Cultural Anthropology (to fulfill liberal learning requirement)
• Statistical Inference (Option for math requirement)
• General Chemistry II (Required for major)
• Biology of the Eukaryotic Cell (Required for major) (Hopefully I will get an A this time around for bio)
Extracirriculars in college:
• Member of the Tri-Beta Biology Honors Society (Currently a general member, but I have had enough involvement to get inducted as an associate member in the spring, lots of volunteer work for charities and blood drives)
• Member of the American Medical Student Association Chapter at my school (Help with fund raisers)
• Collegiate esports player (I represent my school in Varsity leagues for Overwatch, Quake Champions, and Dota 2. I am of the top 1% of playerbase in both Overwatch and Quake Champions. I raise chapter benefits and am an official athlete for Tespa. My school has recently recognized collegiate esports players as athletes, and I am considered a club athlete according to the school)
• Member of school’s chapter for the American Society for Biochemistry and Molecular Biology. Raise awareness for government funding for biochemical and biomedical research, as well as participate in various volunteer work.
• Currently shadowing 2 labs. One lab is focused on molecular genetics, and discovering various responses that microorganisms have with relation to certain environmental stresses and observing whether or not these responses are genetic in nature. The other lab is focused on the study of isoprenoids, primarily in insects in plants, studying the development of inhibitors, structures, and functions of various proteins within these products.
Other things I do:
• Private Clarinet teacher (I teach clarinet to beginning players of elementary to middle school age to earn money and to better myself as a musician)
• Streaming (I stream myself playing games both for enjoyment, but also for monetary gain)
• Investing (I invest in stocks to help my parents financially)
Things I hope I can include in time:
• Shadowing under a doctor (Currently contacting various doctors for shadowing)
• Volunteer work or Internship at a medical center, hospital, etc. (Currently trying to get an internship, or some kind of work at a local dialysis center)
• Summer research experiences (I have applied to a total of 7 REU’s, and am still applying for about 3 more. These are extremely difficult for freshman to get accepted into, but I’m trying since research isn’t abundant in my school, and mostly closed off for upperclassmen).
Honors:
• 1st place winner of the Protein Data Bank’s (PDB) Video Challenge. NIH Director Francis Collins published a blog about the video as well.
• National Merit Scholarship Letter of Commendation
• National Biology Olympiad Semi-finalist
• Dean’s List
High School Stats:
High School GPA: 3.45 UW / 4.12 W (I did not do well in high school…)
ACT Score: 34
If you are wondering why I want to transfer, here are my main reasons.
- I'm currently an in-state student attending a public school. I am also a commuter who only is about a 20 minute drive from my school. My parents plan on moving out of state, meaning I lose my in-state tuition and my ability to commute to school. This drastically increases my price of attendance from 16k to over 42k (over 2.5x as much, since I never received financial aid). I don't think it's worth paying that much to attend a public school that isn't known very well outside of the state.
- Research opportunities are extremely lacking at my current school. Many research opportunities are closed off for older students which I greatly dislike. Why offer shadowing positions during my sophomore year, when many of my peers at other schools would already have gotten positions for actual independent research or research with a prof around the same time.
- Opportunities at my current school aren't as developed or as available as other schools (i.e. lessons for non-music majors, lack of outside help for coaching esports teams, no dedicated uni hospital, etc.)
- I regret not working hard during my high school years and want to redeem myself. I got rejected from all of my reaches and targets last year, and I want to attend a school that I would actually enjoy being a part of (I probably would not write this in my transfer essays, but this is a reason for me wanting to transfer).
Let me know my chances, if you have any questions feel free to let me know. Thanks in advance.