Hi! I’m a rising senior and looking at applying to top colleges (alongside targets and safeties) and wanted to know what my chances are at Yale, Brown, and Dartmouth. I want to do SCEA to Yale, but I’m really not sure if I have a shot, and if I would be wasting the ED advantage to Brown or Dartmouth.
Background:
Hispanic (Mexican) but I put my race as white because I’m not necessarily native, Male, First-generation student
Currently living in Southern California
Stats:
GPA: 3.95 UW, 4.45 W (also my middle school grades (4 B’s) are included since I took high school level math and spanish)
Class rank: 10/563 (top 2%)
Courseload/Exam Scores: IB Diploma Candidate. IB Econ SL: 5, IB Environmental Systems and Societies: 7, AP World History: 4, AP Spanish Lang: 5, AP Chem and AP Human Geography: 3 (should I submit my 3’s??) Senior year I will be testing HL Spanish, HL Bio, HL English, HL Math, and AP US History. All 7 classes junior year were IB/AP.
SAT Subject tests: none
SAT/ACT: haven’t taken it yet, but my practice tests are around 1480, hoping to get it up.
Extracurriculars:
Speech and Debate: (4 years)
Historian, Treasurer (fund raised $5,000), Secretary (officer for 3 years), qualified to the California State Champ tournament in Policy Debate. Organize after-school practices, am in charge of around 5 mentees every year and help them write speeches and cases. Went to a debate camp for Parliamentary debate and won the tournament undefeated, I have a few other titles but probably wouldn’t include them. Around 15 hours a week (although sometimes like 40 because of travel tournaments).
Varsity/Club Swim: (4 / 11 years?)
No leadership position, but I’ve been swimming for around 11 years. I quit club swim my freshman year to focus on speech and debate, but stayed in Varsity at my school. In club swim, I competed at the Junior Olympics in 100 breaststroke in 2016. (Also, I need help here. How do I tell colleges that I competed in club swim? Do I put it on my activity section as a different activity?) 10 Hours a week, around 12 weeks a year
Sharp Chula Vista Hospital Volunteer: (3 years)
Volunteer weekly at the gift shop. I am also a Junior Leader, so I conduct new volunteer interviews, train new accepted volunteers, and organize orientations. Around 4-5 hours every week.
TEDX Club: (3 years)
Prepare a yearly official TEDX conference at our school. Was a founding member (started sophomore year), Vice President and finance coordinator 10th/11th. President 12th. Around 2 hours a week
Aquarium Club: (2 years)
Founder, President 11th/12th. I raise money and purchase aquariums for the elementary school I went to, teachers on our campus, and lecture club members on the science and art behind how aquariums work. I also talk about environmental conservation with elementary school students and club members.
Summer Program: Junior Lifeguards (4 years)
4 Summers - the first year, I was a participant, and 9th/10th/11th I was a lifeguard Aide. I taught kids from ages 8-16 about ocean currents, a lot about the beach, guided and encouraged them through intense workouts, and helped set up mock rescues. I also shadowed and worked with a real lifeguard, doing real rescues alongside other lifeguards and aides. 40 Hours a week for 4 weeks.
Summer Program: Youth4Climate (1 year)
I did this free camp this summer, and we basically raised awareness on social media about environmental issues, grew plants in our backyard, and had conversations about social, political, and economic factors in environmental issues.
Awards: I’m not really sure what to put here, but I won the best student in Integrated Math 2 and Spanish Speakers 3/4 at my school across all classes 10th grade. Probably won’t include. DEFINITELY will include though: Al Gore’s Salk Institute of Arts and Sciences climate crisis conference question contest winner (the conference was really fun!). Does IB diploma candidate go here?
Essay:
My common app is about my aquariums. I LOVE fish, and describe my experience moving from Tijuana, Mexico to California. I explain that I spent a lot of time inside because it was an entirely new culture, language, and environment and my mom was always really scared to let us out of her sight. So I took many English classes, and on my free time researched EVERYTHING there is to know about aquarium fish. We were low income, so I had to improvise on ways to get aquariums for really cheap - and ended up on craigslist viewing used aquariums or going to pet stores and asking if they had any used or old equipment they could give me. I ended up with 4 tanks almost entirely for free. Then talk about spreading my love of fish to my community at school and elementary schools, and transition into my environmental activism. After attending al gore’s climate crisis conference, I was inspired to make changes in my community. I live a more sustainable life, encourage others to do so, use my voice in speech and debate to advocate for but also criticize environmental policy, and spread awareness of these issues. I like my essay, and there’s definitely room for improvement, but I think I can get it hammered down pretty good in the next few weeks.
Letters of rec:
Environmental Systems and Societies Teacher (who was the only other person allowed to go with me to Al Gore’s Conference), I got a 7 on the IB test, an A+, and really enjoyed it.
English/Speech and Debate Advisor: known him for 4 years now as my debate advisor, and working with him closely as an officer on the team. He’s also my english teacher this upcoming year. But, he’s worked with SO many amazing students (he has like 6 Harvard pennants in his class, and many other top schools - he literally ran out of wall space, he’s pinning the pennants down on the ceiling now), so I’m not sure if I’l be in his “top 5% or 1% of students he’s ever worked with”. Heard he write really good letters though.
Counselor: I know her well, but not as closely as my two teachers. Our district is ridiculously corrupt and underfunded, 60 million dollars in debt. They recently fired 200+ staff across the district to “balance their budget”. She has 500+ students instead of the recommended 200 per counselor, so I’m just hoping for the best and giving her all the information I want on the letter. (anyone have any advice on what to tell her?)
Given all of that, should I apply to Yale SCEA, or should I not risk it and apply ED to Brown? I would say my order of favorites is 1) Yale, 2) Brown, 3) Dartmouth. Thank you so much if you got through all of this!!