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<p>Hi, am an international student so hope anyone can help me with grammar. I wrote this some time back but upon review, I decided to tear it apart and focus on one aspect cause it initially sounded like a life story. I hope my ideas flow in a logical manner. tell me what you guys think.</p>

<p>Go ahead and send it by PM… I have some time today and will get back to you.</p>