<p>Hey guys so Im writing an Asian Immigration College essay
-I came to America 3 years ago
- From a province in Philippines where my mom was a doctor
-Instead of money patients would give her like Live chicken or just say thank you
-My mom wouldnt mind if they wouldnt pay.
-Even though my mom was a doctor we werent rich at all
-So we moved to America for a better future
-Family Moved to New York Brother Sister Mom and Dad
-First in a a house where the 5 of us shared in one bedroom
-so me and my bro slept on the floor
the house had poor living conditions.
-There were cockroaches everywhere. The staircase was about to break so we had to walk carefully
-If i open the lights at night in the kitchen you'll see cockroaches swarming around.
-Me and my brother had to go to a high school in the bronx while we were in queens so it was 1 1/2 hour travel because our uncle told us to enroll there
-It took my mom 3-4 months to get a job as a nurse cause the agency screwed her over.
-There were days where were all just walking and my mom would cry cause she knew we were all in pain
- Yo I didnt have friends. I would do homework for other people just to be their friends
- I never felt so lost in my whole life. It was so hard making friends.
-When I first came in school People would talk to me and I would just say yes Because I dont understand what they were saying because they have NY accent
-So I worked hard(cliche part) i tried to read Books 3.9 GPA NOW
- then moved to a hs in second semester Queens struggling again w friends
-hm i tried to read books in the library during lunch
But yeah idk how to finish my story but i moved on pretty fast
-Im new york state science honors society president now.
-Has leadership roles in like 4 different organizations
Idk so much accomplishments for an immigrant in 3 years? for going over through so much stuff but still surpassing it?</p>
<p>and will it help cause Im Filipino and not the typical Chinese Korean FOB ?
i HAVE my private college essay tutor right now
Is it fine? THANKS</p>