College Essay- as you expected, I need readers, and I will give you a big kiss.

Applying to College
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<p>Guys,</p>

<p>Can I get some critical and grammatical advice on my Why College essay? I would really appreciate your help. </p>

<p>Thank you.</p>

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<p>Peeeeee Emmmmmm me.</p>

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<p>i can take a look, pm me</p>

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<p>thanks any others?</p>

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<p>I'd like to help, fightingirish. Maybe you can help me out with my CommonApp essay ;-) too.</p>