college essay, feedback would be really appreciated

<p>hi all</p>

<p>i just finished up a rough first draft of what I think will be my supplementary essay. if anybody is in the mood, I'd be most grateful for some feedback regarding the subject matter/writing and actual content. if you're interested, kindly reply to this thread and i'll PM you the essay right away.</p>

<p>thanks!</p>

<p>Woohoo! Editing opp. I love writing.</p>

<p>thanks for the enthusiasm! i've sent you my essay via PM. feel free to tear it apart :)</p>

<p>I'd be willing to take a look at it, although I'll mostly be commenting on the writing (vocab, sentence structure/organization, flow, etc.), and not so much on the content.</p>

<p>go ahead (+chars)</p>