Feedback Please?

<p>Hi! I just finished my common app essay and I'm really excited about it. It's pretty personal to me so I don't want to send it to my english teacher just yet. </p>

<p>Can someone please read it/edit it and tell me what you think? I'll read yours back!</p>

<p>Thanks so, so much!!!!!!!!</p>

<p>Anyone? I’ll read yours :)</p>

<p>I’ll take a read.</p>

<p>Thanks!!! Anyone else?</p>

<p>me, just PM. i can send you mine if you want!</p>

<p>critique and such</p>

<p>I have a pretty good eye for hammer problems. :smiley: send it over</p>

<p>You guys are the best. Absolute life savers!</p>

<p>I’ll take a look. Let me know if you’re up for looking at mine too :)</p>

<p>I could still use a couple of reads…</p>

<p>I’ll read it, though I am a fellow senior.</p>

<p>I wouldn’t mind reading it. Send it over!</p>