<p>Need help with my college essay intro. It's sort of creative, but I want critique in order to make it better. Please pm me. Also, I'm ignoring fairly new people. I too wish that I could read everyone's essay and help them out, but I have no credibility. I'd rather not post asking for someone's essay because obviously, the person will not believe me. So please, don't post here unless you've made quite a few posts and are credible!</p>
<p>Anyone please ;)</p>