Hi
I was considering writing about overcoming my illness as a topic for my common app essay. I won’t go into the specifics of my condition, but I was in the hospital for all of freshman year, had three major surgeries, had an organ removed, and for a time was physically disabled.
I wanted to write about this because it really did shape who I am as a person, and I think it demonstrates strength of character. I was able to take all honors classes that year and maintain straight A’s, despite how bad my health was getting.
But I’m hesitant to write on this topic because I feel like it might come off as a cliche. I’m applying to the ivies as well as some competitive state schools, and I’m not sure if this topic comes off as overused.
Basically, I’m looking for some guidance as to whether or not this would be a good essay topic. I’m not asking for, nor do I want, anyone’s pity. And I certainly don’t want my essay to somehow come across as though I’m begging the colleges to let me in because I’m sick. I’m obviously going to write the essay in a way that shows how being sick taught me certain things about life and shaped me as a person, but I’m worried that the entire thing might come across as cliched and asking for sympathy.
Any thoughts would be greatly appreciated. Thanks.
You can have your GC mention your health issues in their recommendations, and do something else for your essays.
Suddenly, so many are asking about “cliche.” The goal is how you show the qualities they want. The details of an illness aren’t what adcoms look for in building the freshman class. The goal would be to show (not just tell) how you triumphed over this, challenged yourself, did some good for others, etc, beyond the illness.
If it is well written I think it could work. I don’t know anyone else this has happened to so to me it isn’t predictable. If
While this is not completely unique, it is a feather in your cap that you overcame this adversity and still managed a remarkably challenging courseload, and get straight A’s. I have a strong feeling that if you were able to do that, then you can write a compelling essay and you will do fine.
If you like, there are plenty of people here who will review your essay and give our feedback as to whether it sounds like you are trying to play the pity card or not.
The simple fact that you are asking the question means you are aware of the possibility, and you will be therefore able to focus your essay on the right points you are trying to make.
Kudos to you.
It is not as much about the topic as how you write the essay. If you go that route, be sure stay away from any “woe is me” and focus on how your illness led to personal growth, inner strength, a desire to help others (whatever is appropriate for you).
Keep in mind that the purpose of the essay is not to elicit sympathy but to tell your story and highlight strengths that will make an admissions officer want to have you on campus.