I have been working on my college essay for a while now. I’ve been working on it since the beginning of my junior year and I am now going into my senior year. It has changed a lot since I first wrote it, but I never seem to like it. I feel like every time I read I find something wrong with it but when I asked a friend to read it he said it was great( I think he was just being nice). Would anyone mind reading my essay and giving me some feed back on both the topic as well as the essay itself. Also I kinda wrote too much, I passed the word limit by 200 words :/.
Ps. I don’t think I should post it on here; is there another way for me to let individual people read it on here?