<p>Yeah, the online one. Here’s my essay, could you tell me how it actually is? </p>
<p>Prompt:
A colleague of the great scientist James Watson remarked that Watson was always “lounging around, arguing about problems instead of doing experiments.” He concluded that “There is more than one way of doing good science.” It was Watson’s form of idleness, the scientist went on to say, that allowed him to solve “the greatest of all biological problems: the discovery of the structure of DNA.” It is a point worth remembering in a society overly concerned with efficiency.</p>
<p>Adapted from John C. Polanyi, “Understanding Discovery” </p>
<p>Assignment:
Do people accomplish more when they are allowed to do things in their own way? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.</p>
<p>My essay:
In the above excerpt, it is noted that James Watson solved some of the greatest biological problems through his idleness. It is my belief that people do accomplish more when they are allowed to do things in their own way, to a certain extent. Although people should be allowed to think on their own and do things how they please, I also believe that an unrestrained society could prove to be quite detrimental. Conversely, a society should be restrained to the extent that people are deprived of all of their liberties and rights.</p>
<p>For example, Nazi Germany is a prime example of this. Adolf Hitler took control by appealing to the German people during their darkest hour. As a result, he was able to control the nation completely on his own. In this situation, Hitler had the power to do things exactly as he wanted, but the German populous was so heavily restrained that they could not make their own decisions. Although Hitler was able to do things as he pleased, we all now know that his intents were extremely sinister and ultimately no good came from his actions. Regardless, as far as Hitler was concerned, he accomplished a remarkable amount by being able to do things his own way. Not only is this example a prime instance of how an individual can do things on his own, but how a society can be destroyed when the general population does not have the ability to do things as they please. </p>
<p>Aside from history, the idea of individuals getting more accomplished when they do things their own way applies to me on a personal level. I strongly believe that I am capable of getting an astronomical amount of work done when I have the luxury of being able to do things on my own. For example, I have certain study habits which I have built for myself that probably don’t work for many other people. For this reason, every individual should be able to decide on a case-by-case basis what is best for them and be able to make their own decisions accordingly. However, I also believe that, to a certain extent, there should be some governing body that is ensuring that the individual is not making the wrong choices. For me, this overarching power is my mother and father. My mother and father ensure that I am doing what is best for me while still granting me the liberty to make my own decisions. I believe that this is an excellent system which as worked wonders for me. In the case of Hitler and Nazi Germany, there was no governing force which controlled Hitler. For this reason, he was able to make detrimental decisions without any ramifications. </p>
<p>In conclusion, people should generally be allowed to think on their own an do things how they please. However, it is always beneficial to have someone overlooking the individual’s decisions to keep them on the right track.</p>