Decision: Rejected - CC
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 2370 (800 CR, 800 Math, 770 Writing)
ACT (breakdown): N/A
SAT II: 800 Math II; 800 US History; 720 Chemistry
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 4.0 (4.6 Weighted)
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): does not rank (but I believe I am in the running for valedictorian out of 300 students)
AP (place score in parenthesis): 5 APUSH, 5 Macroecon, 5 Stats, 4 Calc BC (5 Calc AB Subscore), 4 Microecon (self-studied), 3 Computer Science A (cringe)
IB (place score in parenthesis): N/A
Senior Year Course Load: All AP and one required course (foods); counselor indicated in rec that I took “most-rigorous” course load
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): No traditional major awards, but here are some that would be considered better than a minor award:
-top 10 in DECA (competitions about business) internationally in my event
-international test and role-play awards for DECA
-State-level Piano Audition Honors 6 Years in a row
-Piano Award for a private music club that is state-wide: 1st place (probably the best single award)
-International Piano Audition: 1st Place Award, 2nd place another year
-Performed in Lincoln Center and Carnegie Hall as part of winner recitals for piano competitions
Minor Awards:
-National Honor Society (elected secretary)
-AP Scholar With Distinction
-Yale Book Award (given to top student in the grade at my school, as determined by guidance office)
-Community Service Award for program (will explain later)
-Chosen as Jefferson Scholar for my school (UVA full-ride; did not win)
-And High Honor Roll every semester (boring)
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis):
-Community Service (I created a program that has spread across my county; won’t get too into it; won a community service award from school)
-JV Baseball (9,10) - however, this was not put in my application
-Volunteering Club (9, 10, 11, 12) - head of project
-Foreign Language Club (10 ,11, 12) President
-School Newspaper Business Staff (10, 11, 12) - Head of Business Staff
-Stock Market Club (10, 11, 12) - President
-DECA Business competitions(11, 12) - States finalist, States Test award, States 1st place overall, Internationals Test Award, Internationals Role-play Award, International Top 10
Volunteer/Community service: my self-started program (see above)
Summer Activities: Massachusetts Boys State delegate (I was elected/appointed to many positions by peers, including one of the “Big Five” positions of the executive branch)
Essays (rating 1-10, details):
CommonApp - 10 (my college counselor said my essay was the best he’s read, and he has a great record of sending kids to ivies and other similar institutions; highly personal; he was very shocked I didn’t get at least deferred from Columbia)
Supplements: very bland - probably the reason why I didn’t get deferred. Way too repetitive; only talked about what I was interested in studying and tried to sound smarter than I was. Well-written and genuine, but just boring and didn’t show my personality and I kinda sounded stuck-up.
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details): I waived my FERPA so i didn’t get a chance to read, but I can provide details
I think my recs from one teacher and my GC are very good, not so sure about the third rec from my second teacher (she procrastinated and wrote it in a few hours, but we maintained a good relationship so I doubt she wrote anything terrible).
Other
I included a separate essay in the Additional Info; people have told me I was not supposed to do that. It was a 350 word essay about the community service program that I created, and it told the story of how the program grew. Horribly written, and I don’t think I was supposed to write one in the first place. FWIW, I submitted the same essay to a scholarship thing, and didn’t make it past the first round although my scores were above average.
No interview
Applied for Financial Aid?: No
Intended Major: Economics, Poli Sci
State (if domestic applicant): Massachusetts
Country (if international applicant):
School Type: Public, Urban
Ethnicity: Asian
Gender: M
Income Bracket: don’t know
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): only anti-hooks (Asian male, middle-class, wants to do econ, plays an Asian instrument - I am a supporter affirmative action, but I think it’s ridiculous to get to a point where my choice of which instrument I want to play would be considered too “Asian” and works against me but again, out of my control)
Strengths: SATs (which mean nothing besides getting your foot in the door, as I’ve found out the hard way); GPA; SAT IIs; CommonApp Essay; guidance counselor rec; my school’s database for college admissions said my weighted GPA and SAT were higher than anyone who ever applied to Columbia ED in recent memory
Weaknesses: SUPPLEMENTS (seriously, start your essays early. Someone who works pretty hard for 3 years of high school but doesn’t take too much time to write supplements- AKA me - will get beaten by all those kids who work just as hard but started in the summer, and even beaten by kids who have worse scores but really awesome essays. Don’t underestimate the importance of the supplements!); my second teacher rec; that additional information essay I included; AP Scores (but I thought they don’t matter in admissions?)
Where else were you accepted/deferred/rejected: Deferred UChicago; Accepted UMass Amherst (safety)
General Comments: Don’t apply anywhere that you don’t love. I tricked myself into loving Columbia after my parents and family friends told me I was shooting too “low” by wanting to apply to a secondary tier school, a lower-tier Ivy (that is such an oxymoron btw), or an elite LAC for my Early Decision. Don’t let anyone else tell you what you can or cannot do (unless it is a financial issue for your parents - then, it’s only fair you listen to them if they are paying for you).
Don’t obsess over your school database (I guess most schools have Naviance? my school had our personalized database for college admissions. Some schools don’t have any I assume). Mine showed me that I should’ve at least gotten deferred based on my stats - know that there are many other soft factors besides scores that go into elite college admissions. And never assume you have a good shot at a top university, even with international awards and perfect test scores; you are one in a sea of many (sorry to break it to you).
PSA: the results threads here are very biased, because people who get rejected (like myself) will be less likely to post than the jubilant people who get in: there are plenty of very talented people who don’t even post their rejection stats up here bc they are understandably too upset, so just know that these results threads are much more optimistic than reality. I speak from experience, as I only worked up the heart to post about a month afterwards. When deciding where I would Early to, I looked at the Columbia results and compared myself to other domestic unhooked applicants (paying especially close attention to people with my demographics applying to the College) and based on this comparison, I thought I had a good chance and would probably be deferred at least. I should’ve taken into account that these results threads are naturally skewed.
I apologize if I sound salty or anything - not my intention at all. Hyped myself up and had everyone around me believing in me. One day, I think I’ll look back and be thankful for this reality check. Also, I’m actually very glad I was not deferred: I only went back and made my CommonApp better and took out that Additional Info Essay flop because I was thought my rejection was a sign. Had I been deferred, I probably wouldn’t have changed anything I did. Good luck to all future applicants, condolences to the rejected, best wishes to the deferred, and my sincere congrats to the accepted!