comments needed!

<p>I'm an int'l (thai) applicant...can anyone help comment my essay? the essay is considered quite good compared to students in my school...but I don't know if it's actually MIT material...thanks...i really need help...</p>

<p>of course..</p>

<p>can anyone else read my essay too? I know I don't have cookies like ragnarok 227, but please help...thanks!</p>

<p>Absolutely, hon. PM it to me.</p>

<p>sure! just PM me.</p>