Common App:Briefly describe one of your extracurricular activities or work experience

College Essays
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<p>I have written a short paragraph for this section that I would like some critique on. The topic is my experience as a little league umpire. </p>

<p>Will gladly trade critiques with you</p>

2

<p>Fell off the first page without any replies. It’s a SHORT paragraph, anyone!?</p>

3

<p>Hello! I would like to read it, send it over. :D</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you still need any critiques</p>