Common App essay #1

<p>Anyone care to read? It's about as rough of a draft as one can be, but I'd really appreciate feedback. Feel free to post here or pm me. Thanks in advance!</p>

<p>Yes I wouldnt mind</p>

<p>I’ll read it! :-)</p>

<p>I’ll read it. send it to me.</p>

<p>I will! PM me</p>

<p>I shall read!</p>

<p>I’ll read it :)</p>

<p>Sent to all of you guys!</p>

<p>I’ll gladly take a look and critique it.</p>

<p>I’d love to read your life’s work</p>

<p>I’ll read it and do my best to give some feedback</p>

<p>I’ll read it. Can you read mine?</p>

<p>I’ll read it and give you some feedback</p>

<p>I will give it a shot.</p>