<p>At the suggestion of patsmom, who has helped with a pair of my essays, I am here to ask for help. I would appreciate it very much if you would be willing to proof my personal statement. Thank you very much!</p>
<p>PM the essay to me. I do not proofread but can offer suggestions.</p>
<p>Parents -
ever_after has written a beautiful Common App short answer and her essay is equally good. I gave her my impressions but didn't see a whole lot to change. I'm not the best critic, though. I hope those of you with essay-editing experience will take a look and give her your suggestions. I promise you won't be sorry! :)</p>
<p>i need a little help to start off my common app short answer</p>
<p>i mean the one with 150 words...it is too little for me to write everything..what shouldi possibly do now?</p>