<p>I just finished my CommonApp personal statement. Before, I had a different essay and a different prompt, but I got sudden inspiration to write this one, and I think it is much better. (It's about the 14 year age difference between me and my sister and it's very personal) Would anybody be willing to help me? I just need some proofreading and overall feedback. Preferably by parents or anyone who isn't applying this year. </p>
<p>Thanks so much, I really appreciate it!</p>