<p>I am finally satisfied with my common app essay, or as close to satisfied as I will be. I wrote it on one of those "controversial" topics that only succeed if you present them well. I'm unsure if I accomplished this, so I really need some feedback - editing, reading, etc. :) Please let me know if you're willing to read it and I will message it to you; no readers from class of 2014, please!!!</p>
<p>I’ll read it and feedback you</p>
<p>I’ll read it as well!</p>
<p>I’m class of 2013 applying for a transfer - so our essay topics are different. PM me if you’re interested.</p>
<p>Thank you to those who have so far read my essay. I made some major modifications to it, and I like it a lot better now. I was hoping for some feedback on the new version. If anyone NOT in class of 2014 wouldn’t mind reading it, please message me. :)</p>