common app essay prompt 2 - feedback

College Essays
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<p>If you'd like to read it i'd be very thankful :)</p>

<p>Recount an incident or time when you experienced failure. How did it affect you, and what lessons did you learn?</p>

2

<p>I’d be interested in reading. Could you forward me the essay? </p>

3

<p>I can have a look as well</p>

4

<p>bump</p>

5

<p>bump</p>

6

<p>i can read if you still want</p>

7

<p>I’ll take a look.</p>

8

<p>happy to help!</p>