Common App Essay Review??

Hi, I’m applying to Brown, Bowdoin, and some other selective LACs and I was wondering if anyone would be able to review the first draft of my common app essay for me? I just need someone’s opinion on it.

I can help you, just shoot me a message.

Do not share your essay with new users. Look for senior members who may be willing. Better yet, ask an english teacher or guidance counselor at your school.