Common App ESSAY

<p>I wrote two essays for University of California essay prompt.I was going to add
both of my essays but then I found out that the Common App accepts one..HELP,which one should I use? </p>

<p>---First Essay, I wrote about my father and my huge family responsibilty towards him since he is disabled. I linked it back to my hopes and wanting to accomplish my dreams since he is sick and also he had to escape from a war that happened in his country and wasnt able to accomplish his dreams. </p>

<p>I am leaning towards this because it explains a big chunk of why I couldnt do some extracurriclar activies ( I am writting about volunteering for the extracurricular essay) </p>

<p>-----Second Essay, I wrote about my mixed heritage ( middle eastern/hispanic) and its negative effects ( everyone would ask questions and it made me almost embarressed ) and then I became a leader in my community and was proud of who I was. </p>

<pre><code> I am effy about writing about these because the Common App already asks for RACE and they will see my diversity.
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<p>THANK YOU SO MUCH>>></p>

<p>I could read if you read some of mine</p>