<p>I was wondering-- how do you write your "reasons for transferring" essay without sounding too negative? I had my mom read my essay and she thinks it's far too negative to be effective, but I thought I did a fairly good job at remaining moderate. If it's supposed to address your reasons for transferring (hence what you dislike about the school), how do you remain positive?</p>
<p>You could talk about what you want, and mention that the college doesn't have it IE- Don't say your current college is too small, say that you want to go to a big school</p>