<p>I was wondering if anyone would be willing to read/offer advice on my short answer response and essay. My short answer is written about playing the flute. On the short answer, I would like feedback on the clarity, whether or not my voice comes across and whether the response sounds interesting or just generic. </p>
<p>My essay is about how going to a canoeing camp for 7 years changed me as a person. I would like any editing help plus input on the following things:
1. Do I sound as though I am bragging, or does it come across well
2. Does it sounds unique and interesting or is it stuck in the cliched "summer camp" or "service trip" essay category
3. Does my voice come across
4. Does the essay flow well/anything regarding grammar or editing</p>
<p>Lastly, I am fairly wary of getting my writing copied, so I will only PM my stuff to you if you seem trustworthy/have many posts on CC. So if you are new here, no offense, but I will not be willing to PM you.</p>