<p>Anyone willing to look over this? Feedback is greatly appreciated!
However I really do not want any 2014'ers even if you've finished your essay already.</p>
<p>"In the space provided below, please elaborate on one of your activities (extracurricular, personal activities, or work experience)(150 words or fewer)."</p>
<p>For this prompt I chose to write on my piano playing experience. I'm wondering if you readers could help me distinguish between the topic I wrote about and some potential ideas I have.</p>
<p>Background Information:
-Played for 12 years (So there's a lot I could discuss in a 150 word essay!)
-Have a Russian piano teacher, learned a lot about culture, society, immigration, history, and music of course from her.
-Play in benefits (instead of competitions) in the Russian and Jewish community. (Oh btw I'm neither Russian nor Jewish)!
-Love for hip-hop and a love for classical music which I could compare.</p>
<p>Let me know if these topics sound more interesting or are worth adding to my essay!
Thanks in advance.</p>