Commonapp essay for Yale/Harvard/Penn/etc.

<p>Can someone please check my essay and see if its qualified for these schools? I used it for a couple other colleges and got accepted, but while I think its good, I don't think its brilliant... Please help! Thanks</p>

<p>I'll read it. But I am applying to some of those schools... hopefully you dont mind. I have little intention of stealing your work, especially because i'm pretty much done with mine.</p>

<p>I can comment if you want - You can send me Harvard and Penn but not Yale since I'm applying there for transfer. </p>

<p>On second thought, transfer essays are probably different from the standard freshman application so send me your Yale essay if you wish ;D</p>

<p>Hooks me up dudeman. pm me.</p>

<p>me .</p>

<p>i'll help if its not too late</p>

<p>pm it over here</p>

<p>Hi! PM me! I am interested too! Thanks</p>

<p>if it is not too late, i am willing to help</p>

<p>^It's too late :P</p>

<p>hahahahahahah</p>

<p>it is almost as if u are waiting for them to ask.</p>