CommonApp Essay Help

College Essays
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Hi guys!

So I tried my hand at the second option for the CommonApp essay. I feel like my essay isn’t that great, so I was hoping that some CCers would be willing to read it and give me some improvement tips/suggestions.

Prompt:

The lessons we take from failure can be fundamental to later success. Recount an incident or time when you experienced failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?

Essay:

Thanks to anyone who took the time to read this and offer advice!

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Don’t post your essay! That’s a sure-fire way for people to steal it.

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@meaa7130 How do I get help then?

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Ask people to read it, and then pm it to them. A lot of the other threads do that.

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Alright, thanks!

If anyone is willing to read this, let me know! It’s 508 words.

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PM me :slight_smile: I’ll help