So I submitted my essays to Stanford RD, but after reading over them again I feel as if one of them is quite generic. I was wondering if someone could take a look at my essays and tell me if I should be overly concerned about them. The specific prompt I am worried about is the prompt regarding something that is meaningful to me and why it is meaningful to me.
I was feeling somewhat sentimental when writing this essay and I said that the connections I have with the people around me (family, friends, and strangers) are very meaningful to me. I talked about how many of my family members are in Iran and because of that I have difficulty with seeing them often. I talked about how I take my grandparents to physical therapy when they do visit. Regarding my friends, I said that I am always willing to listen and that I enjoy a lot of pastimes with them. I concluded by stating that I volunteer at my local soup kitchen and act as a mathematics teaching assistant in my school as a means of connecting with strangers.
Is this response too generic and should I be seriously worried about it? I would be more than willing (actually hoping) to share the entire essay as well as my other essays with anyone who would care to read them.
Thank you!