Cornell CALS supplement- Nutrition essay feedback please?

College Essays
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<p>I wrote an essay about my experiences and what got me interested in nutrition. If anyone could help me revise it/critique it, I would really appreciate it!</p>

<p>Also, this may be a dumb question but when reviewing applications, does all of the application go straight to CALS (meaning they read both essays)? Or does Cornell undergrad admissions review the basic common app essay and send the supplement essay to CALS?</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>Also, if I do the primary/alternate college choice option, will both colleges see all three essays? Or each college only sees that specific supplement?</p>

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<p>i would like to read it.</p>