Cornell Supplement Essay! Would appreciate all help!!!!

College Essays
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<p>I need lots of people to review my Cornell Supplement essay for CALS.</p>

<p>It is extremely long ~900 words and it is extremely rough. I would like to get it down to ~700 at least and I need everybody's help.</p>

<p>I promise to proofread your essay if you can give me some solid help on it.</p>

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<p>Sure, PM me</p>

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<p>Sent it! Also wanted to reiterate as an added incentive, I will proofread anybody’s essays as long as they provide me with some solid help.</p>

<p>I’m actually pretty good at proofreading other people’s essays, just not my own unfortunately. Last year I was paid to proofread essays by 2 of my friends who got into Ivy league schools.</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>I’l read it if you can read my common app essay!</p>

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<p>I will read it</p>

<p>Sent from my GT-N7000 using CC</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>I decided to take the essay in a new direction which allowed me to make it more succinct so I don’t really need any people to read it. If you still want me to read yours then just PM me. I’m only going to read the essays of people who posted before this though.</p>

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<p>I’ll read in the future when u finish revising if u read mine :)</p>