<p>I'm applying to Harvard, Dartmouth, Brown, UPenn, Northwestern, etc..
Please critique it! If you're willing, I'll send it to you in a personal message
Thanks :D</p>
<p>Send it over. I won’t correct your grammar but I’ll see if it’s effective!</p>
<p>I’ll take a read as well. PM me : )</p>
<p>PM me, would love to read.</p>
<p>I’ll take a look!</p>