<p>I'll PM you it if you want! This is a revised version, so I hope it's better! :D PLEASE rip it to shreds!!</p>
<p>Any takers?</p>
<p>Ooh ooh me! I’ll try and “rip it to shreds”!</p>
<p>I’ll give it a shot.</p>
<p>If you still need help I can take a look</p>
<p>Pm me I’ve got a pretty good eye for grammar.</p>
<p>sure send it to me. :)</p>
<p>I PM’ed it to all y’all! Thanks again</p>