Could someone ease read over my nyu essay I am super stressed

nyu is my top choice but my essay feels… Basic. Could some please pm me to read over it I am super nervous

Why dont you upload your essay ?

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Such a bad idea. Why open oneself up to being plagiarized?

Ya I’m not going to upload it. Luckily it can’t be plagerized for this year as it is past the due date and I already submitted it, but still there is a non zero chance someone could copy it

If you’ve already submitted it I don’t see any benefit of having others read over it because if anyone says anything negative about it this will only stress you out more. It’s normal to be nervous about the application process, just try to take your mind off of it, I’m sure your essay was well thought out.