Could someone please critique my supplement?

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<p>Please send me a PM if you would like to read my supplement.</p>

<p>Any advice would be much appreciated. Thanks so much.</p>

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<p>Hi! I’m also working on a suplement, and would be happy to offer input</p>

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<p>Did you PM me?</p>

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<p>Where are you applying ractogon?</p>

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<p>Did you get my PMs?</p>

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<p>Just sent it to you. Thanks.</p>

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<p>Let me know if you did not receive it.</p>

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<p>Bump…</p>

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<p>i would like to read it for you.</p>

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<p>Ok thanks. I’ll send it over. Appreciate it.</p>

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<p>Just sent it. Thanks again.</p>

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<p>Bump… Need some help.</p>