<p>Could someone help proofread my Pomona Supplement? The prompt is:
"Although it may appear to the contrary, we do know that people have a life beyond what they do to get into college. Tell us about an experience youve had outside of your formal classroom and extracurricular activities that was just plain fun and why?"
PM me and ill send it to you! Thanks!</p>
<p>Yes, I will look over it if you still need me to.</p>