Please critique my supplement essay!

<p>I chose the reinvent your high school one. I wasn't sure how to work the topic, so I'm more concerned with general editing than actual proofreading, though obviously I'd be happy with any advice!</p>

<p>I wouldn't mind reading yours. I'm done with mine.</p>

<p>LOL - it's okay, I just submitted it 5 minutes ago. Thanks anyway!</p>