Could someone read over my "end of the world essay"

Colleges and Universities A-Z Massachusetts Institute of Technology
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<p>I would really appreciate it</p>

<p>Ask and i'll PM it over</p>

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<p>i'd love to help..PM me</p>

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<p>read it...</p>

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<p>i'll give u some feed back</p>

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<p>I ll read it</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>Hi, I'll read it too :)</p>