Could someone review my common app essay?

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>If you won't mind taking some time to review my essay, I'd greatly appreciate it. </p>

<p>Also, I don't know if I should just post my essay here, or pm somebody else my essay. </p>

<p>Thanks for your help!</p>

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<p>I’ll be happy to look at it. PM me!</p>

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<p>If you PM me, I’d look over it!</p>

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<p>Sure thing. PM it</p>

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<p>sure! PM me :)</p>

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<p>I will! PM me too</p>