<p>Umm well essay graders take 3 minutes with each essay and generally don't care for factual information as long as it was well supported.
Like I used Spiderman for the ethical one.
But c'mon dude, a war in 1632 between France and BELGIUM? Lol that is kinda hard to pull a fast one on but I still think it'll be okay if well-supported.</p>
<p>I spoke about how coloniel Ernest LeFleur would use tactics that were considered unethical in the time period such as torture, blocking trading spots (leading belgium starving), and two other things</p>
<p>it was actually my most developed paragraph</p>
<p>Well I'm sure you had sound reasoning but that war is completely BS knowing Belgium is mostly a neutral nation. You could have made a better fake war at least in some obscure country like Zimbabwe.</p>
<p>First off, if it is an English teacher, which it probably is, he or she is not likely to know that much about history in detail. The chances of knowing a war in 1632 between France and Belgium is unlikely.
In the unlikely scenario you have a history teacher grading your essay, realize not all historians are perfect. They don't know EVERYTHING. It could very well mean they had "gaps in knowledge". And if they do have suspicions, realize that they only take 1-2 minutes to grade it and the fact that they have to grade hundreds every day means that they don't have the time or the desire to actually look it up and verify your example. As long as you explain the war in a scholarly attitude with details and you did not make it obvious that you were lying, I think you will do fine.</p>
<p>^ Well i was originally going to use bernie madoff and steroids/baseball, but i realized it wasn't a good idea because madoff and the baseball players were caught and are being punished</p>
<p>besides...i think you may have answered the wrong question. If I remember it correctly it asked, "Are ethical people not successful". You were supposed to answer that either saying that they are or they aren't. Unless you were using a counterargument, I don't think you were supposed to base your essay solely on whether UNethical people are successful.</p>
<p>I don't think graders have enough invested in these to go fact check, but if they're completely sure it's made up, they'd probably take off points.</p>