<p>It's very personal and needs some editing, definitely. I wrote it for a senior writing class and the teacher made some adjustments that I added to my essay, so I'm trying to see what else needs to be done. I also wanna make sure it's not too corny, haha. I have to finish it this weekend. Anyone willing to help?</p>
<p>I’ll read yours also, if you’ll read mine :)</p>
<p>thank you so much, i’ll PM you!! and yes, i’ll read yours too!</p>