Critical readers to look over my (short) transfer statement/essay? (ASAP)

<p>Hi! I was wondering if anyone would be willing to read this brief statement >250 words about my choice of major & career choice for this school I plan on transferring to. Any feedback would be highly appreciated! thanks <3</p>

<p>I’d be willing to take a look. Feel free to send a PM.</p>

<p>I can assist you as well.</p>

<p>PMs are on their way! :)</p>

<p>bumppp any more volunteers? :)</p>

<p>Who wants to read mine ?</p>