Critical readers needed

<p>Hello, I would really appreciate it if somebody can read my transfer statement. I will appreciate it if you are critical reading my essay. Honesty is best, so don't hold back anything if you don't like it. </p>

<p>Thanks!!!</p>

<p>Hi, I’m part of the Expository Writing club at my school, I’d like to take a look at your essay.</p>

<p>Nice, thank you! Just send me an Email to jannicos1208@ gmail .com and I will send it to you!</p>

<p>is there anyone that could read my admissions essay and tell me what they think???</p>

<p>hey @obravo could you read my essay? and tell me what you think? its short, just a couple of pages long.</p>