Criticism Please

<p>Please let me know what you think of this essay. Deadline's coming up real soon. I'm Not sure whether this would be a good main essay.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance.</p>

<p>I'll read it. Just PM me.</p>

<p>send it over</p>

<p>me .</p>

<p>we can swap if youd like</p>

<p>I'll help, too. :)</p>

<p>i'll read, send it over</p>