Critique my boarding school essay??

<p>I need some grammar buffs to critique my essay :D</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll critique. PM it to me.</p>

<p>It’s not really about the grammar though. :)</p>

<p>PM me, I can help with grammar and phrasing.</p>

<p>Considering I did this with about half my APUSH class last paper and am hoping that this will be my summer job, I hope I can do a good job.</p>