I need some criticism on my essay guys!!!!!!

Pre-College Issues High School Life
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<p>If you are willing to help me, I'll PM you the prompt and response :D</p>

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<p>College essay? What kind of essay? I can help. I’ll give you feedback in <15 minutes. That’s the least i can do.</p>

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<p>boarding school essay, thanks!!</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll be willing to help :)</p>

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<p>I can help.</p>

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<p>That’s okay guys, I’ve got my teacher and three other people on here to critique it so I think I’ll submit it now (:</p>

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<p>jk guys… I have more if you still want to critique (:</p>