Critique my common app essay -- tour guide in India!!!

<p>Hahaha I dont know if you'll find it exciting, but any takers?</p>

<p>Oh yea, I'd also like some opinions/comments on my Cornell Engineering supplement.......</p>

<p>sure send it over</p>

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<p>pm me ill read it :)</p>

<p>i would love to read</p>

<p>ill read it, pm it over</p>

<p>pm me, I’m really curious how another trip essay went.</p>